Comments on: cringe: the obligatory bad poetry from college http://www.lionandmagicboy.com/2007/03/09/cringe-the-obligatory-bad-poetry-from-college/ now with bigger words Sat, 13 Feb 2010 13:13:16 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1.4 By: Sue http://www.lionandmagicboy.com/2007/03/09/cringe-the-obligatory-bad-poetry-from-college/comment-page-1/#comment-501 Sue Sun, 18 Mar 2007 05:43:12 +0000 http://www.lionandmagicboy.com/2007/03/09/cringe-the-obligatory-bad-poetry-from-college/#comment-501 Did you steal this from my one of my adolescent diaries which is locked in the storage closet across the hall from my apartment? I mean if you can channel, maybe you intuited it. Except I think I would have written that poem in 1977....it gave me a twinge, not a cringe. I remember when everything felt so huge and now that things <I>are</I> huge, they feel much smaller. Makes me kinda sad. Did you steal this from my one of my adolescent diaries which is locked in the storage closet across the hall from my apartment? I mean if you can channel, maybe you intuited it. Except I think I would have written that poem in 1977….it gave me a twinge, not a cringe. I remember when everything felt so huge and now that things are huge, they feel much smaller. Makes me kinda sad.

]]> By: Cynzim http://www.lionandmagicboy.com/2007/03/09/cringe-the-obligatory-bad-poetry-from-college/comment-page-1/#comment-493 Cynzim Mon, 12 Mar 2007 02:22:44 +0000 http://www.lionandmagicboy.com/2007/03/09/cringe-the-obligatory-bad-poetry-from-college/#comment-493 My cousin used to communicate with her future self when was in her early 20s. Her future self was very helpful and gave good advice. She also looked like my cousin does now. (Of course, my cousin, is on the psy-wi, as am I, as are we all... but that's another story.) Your poem and Peter's response have me pondering the film between past and future selves... which i guess would be the present. and it is, of course, developing. ;-))) cynzim My cousin used to communicate with her future self when was in her early 20s. Her future self was very helpful and gave good advice. She also looked like my cousin does now. (Of course, my cousin, is on the psy-wi, as am I, as are we all… but that’s another story.)

Your poem and Peter’s response have me pondering the film between past and future selves…

which i guess would be the present.

and it is,

of course,

developing.

;-) ))

cynzim

]]> By: Peter http://www.lionandmagicboy.com/2007/03/09/cringe-the-obligatory-bad-poetry-from-college/comment-page-1/#comment-488 Peter Sat, 10 Mar 2007 09:13:22 +0000 http://www.lionandmagicboy.com/2007/03/09/cringe-the-obligatory-bad-poetry-from-college/#comment-488 A couple of weeks ago, a friend e-mailed me two poems I wrote at age 17 that she found in a notebook of hers. She thought they were quite good. I emphatically disagree. A couple of weeks ago, a friend e-mailed me two poems I wrote at age 17 that she found in a notebook of hers. She thought they were quite good. I emphatically disagree.

]]> By: lightspring http://www.lionandmagicboy.com/2007/03/09/cringe-the-obligatory-bad-poetry-from-college/comment-page-1/#comment-487 lightspring Sat, 10 Mar 2007 02:56:58 +0000 http://www.lionandmagicboy.com/2007/03/09/cringe-the-obligatory-bad-poetry-from-college/#comment-487 Hey Cynzim, I'm doing a lot of exploring and examining and discarding old stuff, but none of it's really tangible. And actually the more I read this poem today the more I liked it, but I think it was more in honoring the me I was then and whatever space I was in to write this. Hey Cynzim,

I’m doing a lot of exploring and examining and discarding old stuff, but none of it’s really tangible. And actually the more I read this poem today the more I liked it, but I think it was more in honoring the me I was then and whatever space I was in to write this.

]]> By: Cynzim http://www.lionandmagicboy.com/2007/03/09/cringe-the-obligatory-bad-poetry-from-college/comment-page-1/#comment-486 Cynzim Fri, 09 Mar 2007 20:19:45 +0000 http://www.lionandmagicboy.com/2007/03/09/cringe-the-obligatory-bad-poetry-from-college/#comment-486 Are you "go thru old stuff" mode? i have been trying to do (go thru old stuff) and let go, assuring myself that having manifested both good and bad... i can do so again... ;-)))))) do you find yourself surprised either how good something you created was/is or how bad? my feeling now is usually exactly opposite to how i felt then! ;-) okay, enough winking... this is suppposed to be day of feeling and writing and detoxing... i've strayed from my intention. feel! write! detox! love, cynzim Are you “go thru old stuff” mode?

i have been trying to do (go thru old stuff) and let go, assuring myself that having manifested both good and bad… i can do so again… ;-) )))))

do you find yourself surprised either how good something you created was/is or how bad? my feeling now is usually exactly opposite to how i felt then! ;-)

okay, enough winking… this is suppposed to be day of feeling and writing and detoxing… i’ve strayed from my intention.

feel!

write!

detox!

love, cynzim

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