Comments on: an incredibly long post: novel excerpt http://www.lionandmagicboy.com/2007/03/20/an-incredibly-long-post-novel-excerpt/ now with bigger words Sat, 13 Feb 2010 13:13:16 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1.4 By: marlie marie Lockette http://www.lionandmagicboy.com/2007/03/20/an-incredibly-long-post-novel-excerpt/comment-page-1/#comment-1360 marlie marie Lockette Sat, 13 Feb 2010 13:13:16 +0000 http://www.lionandmagicboy.com/2007/03/20/an-incredibly-long-post-novel-excerpt/#comment-1360 Hey, i am thinking of getting hold of another bike for my hubby. He however is very careful around what type of injuries could occur from biking accidents. See his passion is sports so if he was hurt, he would likely kill himself, no laughs. Do you think motorbiking injuries most likley occur, or is it usually most likely dying! Hey, i am thinking of getting hold of another bike for my hubby. He however is very careful around what type of injuries could occur from biking accidents. See his passion is sports so if he was hurt, he would likely kill himself, no laughs. Do you think motorbiking injuries most likley occur, or is it usually most likely dying!

]]> By: Janine http://www.lionandmagicboy.com/2007/03/20/an-incredibly-long-post-novel-excerpt/comment-page-1/#comment-537 Janine Wed, 04 Apr 2007 07:25:22 +0000 http://www.lionandmagicboy.com/2007/03/20/an-incredibly-long-post-novel-excerpt/#comment-537 WOW! And I thought only us Germans write 30-line-long-sentences. I love it! I want more!!!! Wonderful job! WOW!
And I thought only us Germans write 30-line-long-sentences.
I love it!
I want more!!!!
Wonderful job!

]]> By: jennifergg http://www.lionandmagicboy.com/2007/03/20/an-incredibly-long-post-novel-excerpt/comment-page-1/#comment-533 jennifergg Sun, 01 Apr 2007 01:18:32 +0000 http://www.lionandmagicboy.com/2007/03/20/an-incredibly-long-post-novel-excerpt/#comment-533 I'm sorry it took me so long to get to this...vacation, etc etc. but I wanted a chance to think and comment... So I loved it! I loved the promise of something coming up, the hint of the adventure. I loved the eleven-year-old Kate, and her wanting to ring the doorbell, and all those memories of her helped me feel like I was rooting for her. The language flowed well and was easy to read, I had no troubles. Without knowing more, I can't say more. I don't know how or where this fits in to the larger narrative; and I don't know what comes next. But it doesn't much matter--as it stands, it presents a really intereseting set-up for a character that I feel drawn to and interested in. Brava! I’m sorry it took me so long to get to this…vacation, etc etc. but I wanted a chance to think and comment…

So I loved it! I loved the promise of something coming up, the hint of the adventure. I loved the eleven-year-old Kate, and her wanting to ring the doorbell, and all those memories of her helped me feel like I was rooting for her. The language flowed well and was easy to read, I had no troubles.

Without knowing more, I can’t say more. I don’t know how or where this fits in to the larger narrative; and I don’t know what comes next. But it doesn’t much matter–as it stands, it presents a really intereseting set-up for a character that I feel drawn to and interested in. Brava!

]]> By: Rebecca http://www.lionandmagicboy.com/2007/03/20/an-incredibly-long-post-novel-excerpt/comment-page-1/#comment-507 Rebecca Wed, 21 Mar 2007 19:31:01 +0000 http://www.lionandmagicboy.com/2007/03/20/an-incredibly-long-post-novel-excerpt/#comment-507 Just stopping by to wish you a happy World Down Syndrome Day! 3:21 Just stopping by to wish you a happy World Down Syndrome Day!

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